I have a new poem in my content pages.

Streetlight, Starlight
Posted by Narzack on November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM | 3 Dropkicked

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MacDaddyTatsu (guest)

Comment posted on November 15th, 2004 at 07:56 AM
I like the narative flow of the poem and the emotional carriage. I think that some of the actual wording is a little hard to make mental pictures from, but even that is ok considering the context. I would personally have liked a narrative structure that was more in tune with the tempo of how you wanted it read. It feels really good. I like it a lot!

MacDaddyTatsu (guest)

Comment posted on November 10th, 2004 at 09:20 PM
We need to convince Roy that we need a way to comment on content posts. ;D
Comment posted on November 12th, 2004 at 10:06 AM
Well don't keep me waiting, what did you think?