Narzack

I disagree, Mr. Writer for Mania, The Loch was a truly awful piece of garbage.  Terrible, terrible.  Blatant self-insertion wish-fulfillment crap(alright, main character than every woman wants to have sex with upon first meeting).  Annoying writing tics(Okay, yes.  They're from Scotland.  I don't need to see dinnae, ken, and whit every bloody second.  I will understand that they have an accent.  Don't make me struggle through every single sentence trying to piece together what stupid Rue Macgregor MacClannahanran is saying.), ghastly laspses in simple logic(A 1400s knight would not write a diary in the accent of a 2009 Scotsman.  When a southerner writes in a diary, they don't put Ah do declah!).

Anyway, rambling aside, it was a dumb book complete with all that look-at-the-research-I-just-did-aren't-you-impressed filler crap.