I felt a spicy tingle as her lips brushed my ear. Her hands slid around my chest, teasing me. I felt her warm breath on my neck as she whispered her seduction to me. I felt a forbidden thrill as I glimpsed eternity. I wanted it. Her tongue slid across my neck, and I shivered in horrible anticipation. I felt the pressure of her two sharp teeth as hard points pushing on my throat. Once again her tongue flicked out, and I sucked in my breath. I knew what she wanted. I closed my eyes. It was up to me.

“Please. . . .” her voice was erotic.

I nodded my head. She bit down.

It was the most exquisitely excruciating pain I had ever felt. I loved it, and at the same time, was mindlessly terrified by it. My veins burned as she drew my life into her. Her fingers dug into my chest, and I loved it. My head started swimming and I realized that I couldn’t stand on my own. Her drinking became more powerful and steady as she slowly, tenderly drew me to her. I felt myself slide down and I knew that she was sitting and cradling me, like an infant.

Suddenly, I felt like a deflated balloon. She laid me down on my back, kneeling over me. I could see a drop of my life gather on her red lips and fall onto my chin. I didn’t have the energy to wipe it off. I was dying.

As I watched with dying eyes, she drew her fingernail across her wrist and held it above my mouth. Death or life. It was still up to me. I looked up into her eyes. They were pleading. And suddenly I realized how lonely she was. There was the unspeakable pain of centuries of isolation, and the savage hope that I would be with her. Her lips moved, “Please.”

“Yes.”

She flexed and a drop of her blood fell onto my tongue. It was heavy. I remembered wondering if my blood would be as heavy. And it was sweet. Sweet like love. I wanted more. I looked into her eyes. To my wonderment, there were crystalline tears running down her cheeks. I’ve never made anyone so happy. She put her wrist to my mouth and I drew her in. As her essence flowed into, my vision began to throb.
Posted by Narzack on December 2, 2004 at 11:45 PM | 10 Dropkicked

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merely sky watching (guest)

Comment posted on December 16th, 2004 at 02:33 AM
that was different

MacDaddyTatsu (guest)

Comment posted on December 9th, 2004 at 04:29 PM
...so his "vision" was throbbing...come on...more!
Comment posted on December 9th, 2004 at 06:28 PM
I'm on it.
Comment posted on December 6th, 2004 at 01:37 PM
LOL
I LOVE it. That was very nicely written, and so well timed. We've been having arguments here lately about vampires. I seem to be the only one who sees being bitten in the way you have just written it. The others believe it would be painful.

Just one question.. I thought you'd never be bitten? lol
Comment posted on December 6th, 2004 at 05:32 PM
Yeah, I thought you might like it. And even as much as I hate vampires, I don't believe that being bitten would be strictly painful, or totally pleasurable. It must be a mixture of both.
Comment posted on December 6th, 2004 at 01:31 PM
LOL

I love it.

I thought you'd never be bitten?
Comment posted on December 4th, 2004 at 03:04 PM
You sick vampire.

Anonymous (guest)

Comment posted on December 3rd, 2004 at 10:01 AM
WOW! YOU have such a gift and talent for writing! Keep it up and get published!!!!
Comment posted on December 3rd, 2004 at 06:07 AM
...Wow...

*pauses to think about that for a moment*

Wow.

Did I mention Wow?

So much for the great vampire hunter... guess I'm safe ;)

all kidding aside, that is really REALLY good.

MacDaddyTatsu (guest)

Comment posted on December 3rd, 2004 at 03:25 AM
You know:

1) I hope you continue this...maybe add some pulse pounding action at some point.

2) You HAVE TO add this to your content section so I dont have to dig through entries to find it.

3) Rock on!
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